"this is a really good idea! its nothing like i have seen before-its total original! i like the fact it keeps coming back to the shoe, reminding the audience of the importance of them, giving subtle suggestion about the story line. it create a lot of tension and mystery but doesn't give away all the story line. i would defiantly watch this it if it was a real film!"
Helen Willcock:
"I like the amount of details in the images and the written parts, it's very clear to follow and well laid out."
Ben Morrison:
"Very detailed. Pictures give a good idea of what the finished film will look like while the descriptions help to convey the specifics on angle and type of shot. This helps to show how tension will build up Also... can't wait!"
Georgia Austin:
"I like the pictures, also the descriptions underneath explain the scene well (however you could have written them clearer). I like the story line that you have, and the quick shots suggesting what is going to happen is really good because it makes me want to know what is going to happen at the end."
Jessica Hammond:
"There are clear and detailed diagrams of the shots you want to use in your thriller opening. Although there isn't a lot of detail in the text, it is enough for a storyboard. You have a set of good ideas down and I like it."
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