In the feedback people said that I should add some sound effects in order to enhance certain parts of the film (for example Mae's title). Adding sound effects would also give twists to the sound track as some parts of it go quite silent and still, adding sound effects would mix it up a bit. I followed this feedback and added in sound effects for the title, the window smashing, axe and a burning sound when it cut to her feet.
Another point that was said was that the close up of Josie's emotions when she saw the shoes was a bit too long, so I cut it down, not too much because the emotion was important but it was cut to be a bit shorter.
I noticed that when she was stroking the shoe, just before it cut to a close up of her touching the shoes, she turned them over on the side. The continuety didn't fit when I cut to the close up, so in order to make this better I cut the first shot before she turned the shoes over.
Overall, from the first audience feedback they said that the camera work was excellent as there was many different types of shots, I built tension well and made them ask questions and want to ask more.
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